英语高分作文的五大秘诀：
卷：干净清晰————“衡水人物”
内容：全面而简单的———避免重复
片段：信函撰写的常规：
三阶段(开始、中间和结束)
段落：问候自我介绍写作背景写作目的(申请、建议、道歉、通知、邀请、帮助、咨询等。)
段落：主题句：首先，第二，第三，
结束：
我希望：但愿，某人。会做某事。
我相信：我有信心.
做出决定：请写信告诉我你的决定。
请回复：期待您的早日回复。
过渡词：“第一，第二，然后……”
两个主题句：为一件事，(扩展句1)；对于另一个，(延伸句2)；
两个主题句：一方面，(扩展句1)；另一方面，(延伸句2)；
三个主题句：first和most，(扩展句1)；附加，(扩展句2)。最后但不是最不重要的，(扩展句3)；
四个主题句：首先，(扩展句1)；除此之外，(延伸句2)；更何况，(延伸句3)；终极，(延伸句4)。
选择单词和句子：
造正确的句子。
步骤1:找到主题
步骤2:找到谓词
步骤3:添加装饰
进行适当的升级。
前面加一个：
很明显.
很明显.
毫无疑问的是.
没有人能否认.
不用说，
不言而喻.
以后再补：
公式：因为/万一/所以/为了/如果/只要/这件事
用法：“完整句(主谓)”必须加在其后。
.用于.在那.考虑到.以防.因为害怕.结果，
.因此，以便/为了.只要.哪个.
我们应该学好英语，正如我们所知，这对我们学生来说很重要。
(2018新课标三)假设你是李华，你的英语朋友彼得写信询问你们学校学生的体育活动情况。请给他回信，包括：
1.学校体育场馆；
2.主要运动；
3.你喜欢的物品。
注：1。字数在100左右：
可以适当添加细节，使文字连贯。
亲爱的彼得：
你过得怎么样？收到你的来信我非常高兴。你在上一封信中问我关于我们学校的体育锻炼，下面的信息可能会给你一个粗略的描述。
首先，一个令人难以置信的新体育场已经建成，它已经成为我们学校的新地标。此外，随着体育场的建立，各种各样的体育赛事得以举行，其中乒乓球，足球以及跑步比赛非常受欢迎。至于我，我陶醉于篮球，因为它给了我力量
gth to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.I am looking forward to meeting you !
Yours,
Li Hua
（2019新课标III）假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1. 时间；
2. 活动安排；
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? I have learned that you are greatly interested in music.Recently, a music festival is going to be held in our school ,which will be not only meaningful but also interesting. So, I, on behalf of all my classmates ,am writing to invite you to join us.
Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with,Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall.Besides,the opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am,and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech.Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students.You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Hopefully, you could make it to the activities. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. I am looking forward to your reply and your presence.
Yours,
Li Hua
三﹑建议信
假设你是李华，你得知英国朋友Peter想要学习中文，请你写信给他一些建议。
1.参加中文学习班;
2. 多看中文书刊、电视节目；
3.学中文歌曲；
4. 交中国朋友。
注意:
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.开头语已为你写好；
3.词数100左右。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? Recently, I have learned in your Facebook that you have a great desire to master Chinese. So, I am writing to give you some sincere suggestions.
To begin with, some language courses can help you improve your grammar and vocabulary. Besides, a few local books,magazines and CCTV programs are also beneficial for you, which are not only meaningful but also interesting.What’s more, many Chinese songs may help polish your pronunciation and learn more about our culture.Ultimately, if I were you, I would make a lot of friends from China, in that practice makes perfect.
Hopefully, my suggestions would be of great help to you.I have the confidence that you will master this beautiful language soon. Please drop me a line to let me know what you will choose to do. I am looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
四﹑申请信
（2019新课标I）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1. 写信目；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you doing? I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in London, who is crazy about Chinese painting.I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery.
First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese,which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture,I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least, through my introduction and efforts, I do believe I can strengthen the friendship between China and England.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Should you offer me such a golden opportunity, I would be most grateful.Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2020新课标III）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
（2021年全国甲卷）假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible.I will take your advice into consideration.I really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2018新课标II）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：
(1)短片内容：学校的发展；
(2)放映时间、地点；
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us in enjoying it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
The Student Union
八、演讲稿
假定你是李华，是一名高中生。最近，你将参加市中学生英语演讲比赛。请围绕“Positive Attitude”写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1．积极的人生态度的重要性；
2．如何培养积极的人生态度。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone!
It is an honor to make a speech here.I’d like to stress the importance of having a positive attitude.
Personally, our attitudes towards life determine how happy we are.We can’t always change what happens to us, but we can change the way we look at things.If we have a positive attitude, we can overcome the difficulty and get ready for greater challenges.What should we do to develop a positive attitude? First and foremost, focus on the bright side of things instead of complaining about the negative side.Additionally,be grateful.No matter how difficult our situation seems,there is always something to be grateful for.Last but not (the)least, making friends with positive people,watching positive shows, listening to positive music, and reading positive books are all good ways to develop a positive attitude.
With a positive attitude, we can live a happy life.
That’s all.Thank you.
（2021北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian Park this weekend,where we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring.But I am afraid I couldn’t make it.
I was severely injured in a soccer game last night.The doctor examined me carefully and told me that I had to stay in bed for at least one week.I asked him whether there was any possibility that I could recover faster,yet the answer was negative.My condition doesn’t allow me to go anywhere until my legs are fully recovered.
It is a pity for me to miss this trip that I have been longing for.Shall we put it off until next weekend if the weather permits? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
十﹑记叙文
（2020新课标Ⅱ）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；
2. 采摘过程；
3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
My Weekend
Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend.The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh.We were attracted by the beautiful scenery.There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.
On arriving,we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree.Using baskets and ladders,We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.
I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature.Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!
